Wednesday, April 7, 2010
this story is going very slowly it seems, she describes more of the background and other personal relationships towards the main characters. So far in the reading I haven't really seen (in terms of clarity) a story line that is going in some direction. Most of the things she talks about have to do with the past or are related to some experience a character has with something else. She has done a good job with describing each character and their own differences, but it still seems unclear who some people have to do with the main characters.
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While I agree with you about that she has done a really good job describing the charachters, I don't agree that the story has no direction. Actually, it seems to me that the story keeps unfolding and creating complexities in the plot.
After I posted this I read more and felt much better about the plot, it just takes a very long time for it to unfold.
I completely agree with Ingrid, the book takes a very long time to give you any direction of where the plot is taking you. Although the plot is well thought out, at times it seems like Roy doesn't know where she is going within the story.
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